Thank you so much for your touching comment ❤

I don’t know if I can elaborate more than that I rewrote the chapter 5-6 times before I was satisfied with the structure. I am therefore glad that you grasp the interweaving of the two couples’ stories.
The fact that Tusnelda’s rocket should explode just as I was working on this chapter is one of the random things the game gives and which I could never have thought of.

Rasmus's last look at Blue gutted me TT.TT

And this line from him turned the knife in my wound:

“I love her Martin, how am I suddenly going to hate her?”

I was legit afraid for Tusnelda’s life after that rocket crash D:

I love how you intertwined Martin/Tusnelda’s relationship and Blue/Rasmus’s relationship as foils (emphasizing how the partners communicate differently with each other!), and I love how the tensions have built up over the past couple chapters into this explosion of a chapter!

Ugh, I have so many emotions for all the characters here, what a wonderful chapter!! <3

Thank you very much for your appreciative comment ❤

I spent so long building up to this climax.
I also spent a really long time taking and selecting the photos I used for the chapter. Played the confrontation several times since I don’t use poses.
I love taking advantage of whatever randomness the game gives me, as long as I can still maintain some control.
That’s why I’m not a fan of story progression, as you can probably imagine 😆

Precisely here is one of the few occasions where Martin reacts spontaneously with anger because he is afraid of losing Tusnelda. The strength of their relationship is that they always find each other after their disagreements.

And, I don’t know, I’m not going to be too hard on Martin here. He shouldn’t have yelled at Tus when she just survived a spaceship crash, but I can empathize. Sometimes after a horrifying shock, relief comes out as anger. It shouldn’t. But it does.

I’m glad they talked it out. That’s what makes the difference.

Poor Blue 😥
She and Allan have such a toxic relationship and one wonders why she does not break out? Why does she not choose Rasmus and thus the joy and confidence?
Fear is devastating and the most powerful force in the world.
This chapter made me pretty sad … even though I wrote it myself. I’ve seen it too often.
They are all three victims of a toxic game.

Oh! I’m so relieved Tusnelda escaped alive from her crash. Without her, there is no story.

You scared me with that rocket. Im so glad Tus is alright. Ill be devastated. This chapter though is so sad. Poor Rasmus. Alice and Allan too. But there’s something about Allan omg. He needs therapy. His anger management issues nees to be dealt with and not by using his partner as a punching bag. Also his line, “need to beat my dummy so i dont hit you.” Major red flag. Even without your dummy you have no right to lay a hand on anyone. Im so worried for Blue now. Im pretty sure he has hit her before. He has definitely threatened to hit her before and that’s gone too far. Makes me think of why she sought a “good fun relationship” in the first place. Ugh. Poor Blue.

Obviously! Of course you will use some more medieval methods. I’m totally with you 😆

Bwahaha, what kind of savage do you take me for, going around smacking people with baseball bats? I am much more refined. Would use a scythe.

Oh my gods misreading that makes my comment seem so much darker!

I can sort of see Alice’s point of view. Allan is the bigger problem here – it’s easier to placate him and hurt Rasmus than the other way around, because Rasmus is sweet and wouldn’t hurt her. Doesn’t make it right. Just makes it very sad.

Oops! I misunderstood what you wrote. You want to slap Allan’s baseball cap off his head and not hit him with a baseball bat …. that might say something about my innermost thoughts 😆