Comments on: 52. Fixing Bugs

By: MonaSolstraale

MonaSolstraale — Wed, 06 Apr 2022 17:45:56 +0000

In reply to Ninja Pink Sex. Thank you for your comment I'm always so excited about whether I'm able to communicate what I want in a chapter and your comment makes me pretty confident that it's succeeding. It probably happens to all of us from time to time we completely misunderstand each other and it definitely happens to Tusnelda and Martin in this chapter :? Will they be happier without each other? Tusnelda has come into doubt and you will get her answer in the next chapter ;)

By: Ninja Pink Sex

Ninja Pink Sex — Wed, 06 Apr 2022 15:44:44 +0000

Whoa.
Tusnelda had QUITE the day. Masato didn’t waste any words. lol I thought he was just a flirt, but naaaah, he offered to destress Tusnelda, and I doubt he meant with a trip to the spa. Ooooh, Masato, you and Don are naughty naughty boys!
And THEN he thinks she took him up on his offer when he can sense her nearby.
Oye, Martin really goofed up at the end. Like I get that Tusnelda needed to cool down after what Martin said, but taking the rocket??? One of their biggest issues is that she focuses too much time on her extracurricular activities, and not enough on her partner (Martin). That’s not helping things, Tus
Ah well. I hope they work things out. Or maybe they’d be happier without each other?

By: MonaSolstraale

MonaSolstraale — Sat, 02 Apr 2022 07:12:23 +0000

In reply to cathytea. Me too :)

By: cathytea

cathytea — Sat, 02 Apr 2022 05:02:01 +0000

In reply to MonaSolstraale. But I love her enthusiasm!

By: MonaSolstraale

MonaSolstraale — Fri, 01 Apr 2022 21:35:13 +0000

In reply to cathytea. Martin could definitely need a little more reciprocity in the relationship At that point, Tusnelda is very immature :roll:

By: cathytea

cathytea — Fri, 01 Apr 2022 16:43:03 +0000

Oh, this is a difficult dilemma. Martin is a mature to always want to take care of himself. He could use a bit more reciprocity in the relationship.

By: MonaSolstraale

MonaSolstraale — Fri, 01 Apr 2022 15:03:57 +0000

In reply to Yimiki. Thank you for your comment I have discovered that Masato has a serial romantic aspiration and that explains why he is often so flirtatious. He definitely has some bad traits but is also very attracted to Tusnelda. He often tries to invite her on dates. It's not going to happen ... sorry Masato :lol: You could say that with Masato's offer to fix Tusnelda, she is allowed to see her own mirror image. She has offered him a treatment many times and she does not seem to like the opposite offer :lol: That conversation went really wrong. None of them were in a state where they could accommodate each other's point of view. Tusnelda and Martin will have to meet somewhere in the middle if they are to stay together otherwise their conflict over their opposing basic desires will keep popping up and over time grow in strength. Tusnelda requires a lot of space and Martin is actually quite spacious, but she should be able to accommodate that he can have a bad day. In many ways, their gender roles are opposite of the general, but their conflict is found in lots of marriages. As I mentioned in the introduction, I have planned some form of mental journey for Tusnelda in the next chapter. Right now it is she who has the biggest doubt.

By: Yimiki

Yimiki — Fri, 01 Apr 2022 13:35:51 +0000

Those infected squirrels are really running rampant, aren’t they? xD Poor Fie. Luckily the disease is taken care of quickly! Aaaaaaaand she’s right back to hunting bush squirrels. Squirrel bushes? Let’s hope she wins the fight this time.

Gah, Masato. He knows she is married and keeps trying to flirt with her anyway. It seems he has two moods: angry and flirty. I agree with him that Tusnelda should not push him to de-vampire himself but good gods, he has his fair share of bad traits too, doesn’t he? xD

I’m slightly worried about the boundary talk between her and Martin, too. They clearly want different things and Martin’s focus on home life and a child is making Tusnelda uncomfortable. On the other hand, Tusnelda’s boundless free will, stubbornness and habit of forgetting about others is making Martin feel unloved. Let’s hope they can find a good middle ground. I wonder what decision Tusnelda will end up making.

Oh, dear. Hoo boy. That’s not going well. The exact wrong words at the exact wrong time. Oh my gods and she’s traveling with the rocket right after fighting with Martin? She’s already almost died in that thing once o.o
Oh man… last time was easily fixed, but this time it led to a pretty nasty fight. Though Martin was out of line, I feel bad for them both.