Comments on: 61. Fertility

By: MonaSolstraale

MonaSolstraale — Mon, 29 May 2023 18:45:18 +0000

In reply to Manny Likes Sims. Thanks

By: Manny Likes Sims

Manny Likes Sims — Mon, 29 May 2023 18:41:52 +0000

Awww, I’m so worried about Blue and the choices she’s making! TT.TT But I’m still rooting for her to get into a better situation! I’m enjoying the roller coaster of emotions <3

By: MonaSolstraale

MonaSolstraale — Sun, 19 Mar 2023 22:41:20 +0000

In reply to GlacierSnow. Thank you very much for your feedback I'm glad the characters seem interesting. Alice definitely has a problem and poor Rasmus is innocently caught up in it. He is slowly finding his footing again. Allan is hot headed and jealous. It is the worst possible combination together with Alice who is outgoing and rather flirty. Now that you mention the different plots, you can expect even more threads next season. I hope it doesn't end in chaos :lol: Several of the familiar characters will change. I hope that their development will seem believable and that they will not lose their appeal.

By: GlacierSnow

GlacierSnow — Sat, 18 Mar 2023 23:40:42 +0000

I am still loving this story! All the different plot threads and character arcs are so engaging.

Worried about both Rasmus and Blue/Alice right now as I get ready to start reading your third season. Especially seeing Blue starting the same thing again with another guy.

Your characters all just are so interesting! Even the ones who aren’t such good people.

By: MonaSolstraale

MonaSolstraale — Wed, 29 Jun 2022 13:36:47 +0000

In reply to Yimiki. Thanks Yimiki Your words make me really happy :D I love in many ways writing the chapters where I can let the contrasts paint half of the narrative. All life contains joys and problems and things are rarely as they appear on the surface. There is some likelihood that Andy will get yellow hair, but whether it will have any significance the future will show.

By: Yimiki

Yimiki — Wed, 29 Jun 2022 12:03:50 +0000

Finally had a moment to get to this! And what a chapter indeed. I think this is one of my favourites. Blue/Allan and Tusnelda/Martin in this chapter are such stark opposites of each other. One relationship that is based on love and truth, but has issues conceiving, and one relationship that has conceived but it based on lies, fear and violence.

Tusnelda and Martin’s issues almost seem like a non-problem in comparison; the world is full with options for them, as long as their foundation is true. Where Alice’s foundation is so wobbly that it will fall over with the slightest bit of wind. I truly fear what will happen if Allan finds out that his baby is not really his. What are the chances that Andy will age into a toddler with yellow hair? Would Allan turn his wrath on the kid as well as his wife? Would Alice let him?

Oh, geez. And she’s right back to her flirty ways as soon as Allan turns his back. If only she’d realise that the true right thing, the only right thing, to do here is to stop repressing part of herself and leave Allan entirely.

I hope you have a wonderful vacation Mona <3

By: MonaSolstraale

MonaSolstraale — Sat, 25 Jun 2022 10:43:48 +0000

In reply to cathytea. It is, but will he ever know? :?

By: MonaSolstraale

MonaSolstraale — Sat, 25 Jun 2022 10:40:13 +0000

In reply to Mercuryfoam. Thanks for your comments I really like Alice a lot and it's a sad development. She does what she can to fit in and it's pretty devastating :sad: I hope I managed to give Allan some more nuances.

By: Mercuryfoam

Mercuryfoam — Sat, 25 Jun 2022 03:57:19 +0000

… omg this development

By: cathytea

cathytea — Wed, 22 Jun 2022 16:31:55 +0000

Oh my! So much in this chapter! So it IS Rasmus’s baby! I feel quite sad for Alice. I hope the fertility formula works. Do you think they’ll adopt that dog? Great chapter!