Comments on: 98. Brain impact

By: MonaSolstraale

MonaSolstraale — Fri, 02 May 2025 09:35:46 +0000

In reply to Tavvles. Thanks for your comment I see Martin as Tusnelda's anchor and her security that she always returns home from her mental and physical excursions. Both Tusnelda and Martin are dismissive of Poly's offer. Tusnelda rejects the idea of someone interfering with her and Martin is first and foremost completely faithful to the woman he loves and would never dream of going into that kind of proposal. Don finds himself mentally on a journey over a terrifying abyss. It takes a lot of courage to leave one's usual way of life, regardless of the fact that he can no longer thrive with what he comes from. His vision promises him redemption. Izumi thrives in the role of mother with all the deprivations it entails. Alice? She misses a man in her life and it is about to lead her out on thin ice. Let's stick with that

By: Tavvles

Tavvles — Sun, 27 Apr 2025 13:42:20 +0000

Ooh I love this chapter! So many characters are at crossroads in their lives.
The love and loyalty between Tusnelda and Martin melts my heart. Poly has introduced new possibilities… but is that what they want? Tusnelda seems to be at peace with the way things are now. It’s something to have a long discussion, for sure…
Don is having some revelations! I think he should find Delphine and explain everything to her! Yes, it’s hard facing past mistakes, but it could be the start of something beautiful, and he can’t afford to miss that!
I’m glad to see Izumi do well after her twins 🙂
Lastly, Alice… I don’t know everything she’s going through, but I hope she stays safe! That’s all I’ll say for now.

By: MonaSolstraale

MonaSolstraale — Sat, 26 Apr 2025 21:33:49 +0000

In reply to cathytea. I wish weight loss would be as fast in my life as it is in Izumi's world Yep, Don is moving quite slowly across the bridge, as rickety as it looks I can't reveal what Tusnelda and Martin decide on in the end. They will have to go through a process to arrive at their personal choice, even if the solutions are obvious

By: cathytea

cathytea — Sat, 26 Apr 2025 17:51:06 +0000

I love the name Sif! And Izumi is already losing weight! It looks like Don is slowly inching his way across the bridge! I’m excited for that. And… for a long time, I’ve been thinking that alien pollination would be a great solution for Tusnelda and Martin! I’m glad to see it introduced into the plot–I hope they change their minds. They’d make great parents to a little half-alien baby!