22. To dare is to lose a foothold for a time…
Naja is angry. What happens between her and Duane is not Finn’s case! ….. But Finn sticks to his view. …. Naja still has a lot to learn and here she has started a very dangerous game.
Naja shakes irritatedly the rain of the body. She can not cope one more day on the terrible ground.
Now she has arrived, and she has made a decision.
Duane takes the unexpected guest by surprise.
He hospitably offers his room to Naja …. it is yours as long you need it.
Makoa can’t help but hear their conversation ….
Finn will not be happy about this.
But first, he offers Naja some food.
Finn brushes carefully Bella’s fur.
He fills her food bowl before going to bed.
He looks sadly himself in the eyes as he brushes his teeth …. never has he quarreled like that with Naja …. Now she has moved, and Finn is forever alone.
8 Comments
pammiechick
Not alone if he meets someone!
That’s what he has to do. He’s too controlling over her. She’s his sister!
MonaSolstraale
Yes you are absolutely right 🙂
Finn is too closed and too much in control …. and he is in the process of suffocating the one he loves most.
mypalsim
Naja is still a child. Teen, yes, but not an adult. I’m not saying Finn is really a responsible person, but he’s at least the adult. Naja does not need to be moving in with her love interest. Just my opinion. :/
MonaSolstraale
In the real world, I would probably agree. Naja is not an adult …
Hm!… It’s a bit late to rewrite the story and it would probably also give me some problems when I have to describe Finn’s development.
mypalsim
Don’t rewrite from someone else’s opinion. 🙂
MonaSolstraale
Don’t worry … it was just a humorous remark 🙂
Mercuryfoam
Ahh wow Naja has acted quite rashly there! I’m not too sure if I’m happy with Finn there. Shouldn’t he think of his sister’s safety than his loneliness first? xD Oh boy. If he kept her around just to ease his loneliness, I think its a good idea that she left so he can learn to live with himself. Although I also don’t approve of her leaving while she’s still a teen. lol.
MonaSolstraale
Yes. Teenager on the run. I think Naja is desperate and it leads to desperate actions.
Finn is not yet aware that he is pushing her away with his closeness and attempts to protect her.